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Isabela ([personal profile] sealegs) wrote in [community profile] exsilium2014-01-06 06:46 am

oo1 | voice

All right, I think I've finally found my way around this thing. And what better way to use it than broadcasting what I have so far of my newest work? I usually have Varric give my friend-fiction a quick read before I share it with anyone else, but I think this snippet is particularly fantastic. It's dedicated to a certain new sparring partner I ran into.

Settle down, everyone, Aunty Isabela's got a story for you all.

A second before he was but a small pup, but now there stood a tall, handsome brute of a man. Ren, they call him. His bulging muscles moved powerfully underneath his thick cloak, foretelling a hidden strength that couldn't so easily be seen in his softer features. Pink, plump lips parted as he spoke, his voice a deep, alluring baritone.

His expression remained as still as an untouched lake's surface as he began to strip his clothing. The cloth fell heavy. What was left was skin as white as snow, marked with striking tattoos that resembled sharp claws. Oh, he was a beast all right, but not in the ways anyone expected.

He looked as if he could split any man or woman in half with the force of his passion, more powerful than any spell, but his shy demeanor had an allure of its own as well. How could anyone resist such a delicious, sculpted man? Even his buttocks appeared personally shaped by the Maker Himself. What any man or woman would do to grab hold of that forbidden treasure. But alas, that is an excavation for another day, another night underneath the sheets.
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[Let's just say when Ren went browsing the network this is not what he expected to find. He thought Isabela was kind of strange when he met her, but now... She is DEFINITELY STRANGE? In the stranger danger kind of strange sense.]

This does not read very appropriate. [A long, awkward pause. He just doesn't know what else to say but if he weren't a dog right now his face would be completely red and embarrassed. It's a good thing that doesn't translate to a mechanical voice.]

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[ The one day Kougyoku decides to check the network and she hears this. Technically, she's old enough to be listening to this sort of thing, but don't expect much from a sheltered princess. ]

Oh, I—w-what is this? What an indecent... Are you saying you have met this person? And that you are writing about him? How are you so certain that he could do those things?

[ Because she's not sure if she can handle meeting this man in person. Not that she expected to! Shut up. ]

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[Nate doesn't know whether to laugh or be horrified. Who writes flowery purple prose about a puppy? He remembers Ren -- he had helped him find his feet the first day he had gotten here, but he didn't remember anything about him being anything other than a dog.

So he settles for an awkward laugh that rapidly disintegrates into a very unsure sort of chuckle.]


There's no easy way to ask why you're writing porn about a dog, is there?

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[personal profile] miscreant 2014-01-06 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
You would get a lot farther sharing that in your own bedroom than here, I think.

[Perhaps predictably, Seviilia's voice is most unruffled. She found Gilneans -- werewolves, worgen, whatever this world called them -- insufferable.]

I would be careful sharing your bed with a worgen if that is your plan. You never know when the beast will win the war over the man.

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[personal profile] ex_longanimity327 2014-01-06 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
[ a moment of silence before there is the sound of clapping—it's slow and measured, and Izumo's face hurts from trying not to laugh, but by God, this is hilarious. ]

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[He listens very intently! Hot sounding woman reading something like this? Oh hell yeah.]

I like it! There's gonna be more, right?

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[ she makes a brief hmm sound of consideration. ]

There is room for improvement, but it does have great potential.

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[personal profile] irritating 2014-01-06 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, what a man. Y'sure all you did with 'im was spar?

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[personal profile] hyanaimne 2014-01-06 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
My. [there's restrained laughter in her voice]

Will you be writing more and sharing it? Or simply teasing us with just this?

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[personal profile] hellosailor 2014-01-06 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
You've got quite the imagination there. [He doesn't bother to hide the amusement in his voice. He'd lived a long and full life, so the content didn't exactly shock him.]

I don't believe I've seen you around before, Isabella is it?

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[personal profile] lucency 2014-01-06 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Do you mean dedicated to or inspired by?

[ not that belle is worried, either way. in fact, she sounds fairly amused. ]

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[personal profile] tragicomedienne 2014-01-06 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
W-w-what the hell?!

[That is some amazing, shrieky, scandalized bluster.]

Why would you put something like this here? What is friend fiction supposed to be?

Is this about a real person?

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[personal profile] wolfuncaged 2014-01-06 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
[Oh Maker, they're BACK. Fenris makes an amused sound, all the same. She has a different victim for her story this time]

It is good to see you have found other subjects for your little...stories.

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[personal profile] vocalizer 2014-01-07 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
What Ren are you talking about exactly?????????????

[ Not that he can't already tell from the description and the comment about being a small pup, but... this has to be some kind of mistake, right? ..... RIGHT?! ]

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[personal profile] permit 2014-01-07 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
[ there's just -- the longest pause.

... but eventually there's a chuckle, low and almost humoring. ]


I don't suppose you're sharing with the interest in a round robin.

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[personal profile] charming_jerk 2014-01-07 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
[You can definitely hear amusement in this guy's voice.]

A smut novel in the works? I think that's gotta be a first over the network. "Friend fiction", huh.

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[THIS IS THE KIND OF SHIT SHE'S BEEN MISSING bless your heart Isabela.

Rose keeps to text though because she doesn't trust her voice to keep how much she's enjoyed the little snippet of hideous semi-erotica to herself]


I must say, your use of descriptive adjectives is quite impeccable. Oftentimes authors fall into the trap of attempting to show rather than tell without possessing the ability to do so.

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[personal profile] dayplanners 2014-01-07 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
[Friend-fiction... She can get behind that. It definitely sounds more fun than plain old fanfiction anyway.]

Hmmm, what happens next, what happens next? Is it written yet?

What does he do after he takes off his clothes? Is there someone else there? Ah! Does Ren have to go on a big adventure and look for them?!
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[personal profile] unmasking 2014-01-07 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
Uh, do you often imagine dogs turning into strapping Gaston-like men? [Because he is a little creeped out.

No, he'll vocalize that, that's important.]


Because that's a little creepy.
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[personal profile] fujibayashi 2014-01-07 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
You-- you wrote that?

[She's blushing a little. Someone hasn't read dirty romance novels before.]
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[personal profile] skilful 2014-01-11 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
[ chuckling, then-- ]

What a wonderful story! A friend-fiction is a story about a friend, right? So your sparring partner is a puppy who can turn into a man?