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Asbel Lhant ([personal profile] pactfulfilled) wrote in [community profile] exsilium2013-09-04 10:09 pm

002. [Voice + Action]

Um. So does anyone have experience writing scripts? Or an interest in theater? Because I think I could use a few pointers...

[There's a slight pause before Asbel clarifies, and a muffled thump that might be a book closing.]

It's for the upcoming talent competition. The one at the end of the month? Some of us were thinking about putting a short play together for it.



[Asbel knew it'd be a lot of work, but he hadn't thought scripts could be so tiring! He's sitting outside one of the Hold's training rooms. Excalibur lays on the bench beside him, and he has a towel draped across his neck while he tries to cool down from the morning's routine. But in his hand...is this. He'd decided to read up on what plays and fairytales he could find in the library, but this script doesn't even make any sense! How are you supposed to figure out the characters' intentions when they keep talking about completely random things?!]

[He continues to read out loud, occasionally offering his own commentary as he attempts to make heads and tales of the text.]


"When the devout religion. Of my eye maintains such falsehood, then turns tears to fires. And these, who often drowned, could never die." But wait, if they drowned, then wouldn't they already be dead?

[A groan, but he resumes.]

"Transparent heretics, be burnt for liars. One fairer than my love. The all-seeing sun never saw her match since the world first began." So...he's in love with the sun? Hold on! But that doesn't make any sense at all! I thought he was supposed to be in love with a girl from an enemy House? Why would he be in love with the sun? Unless, it means he likes riding off and doing things outdoors.

[Asbel sighs in exasperation, closing the booklet and slumping in his seat.] Okay, what the hell did I just read?

[OOC Note: CR, if they wish, are welcome to assume that Asbel has already mentioned the talent competition to them and proposed the idea of putting together a group performance of some kind.]
wilder: (Sarcam - dude whatever)

Voice

[personal profile] wilder 2013-09-05 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
[Zelos was never much of a poet, but wow Asbel, wow.]

Ahahaha...They...never covered poetry much in the Knight's Academy, did they?
wilder: (great zelos wisdom time!)

Voice

[personal profile] wilder 2013-09-05 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Well last I checked I'm not a disembodied voice soooo- yep! Looks like you did!
wilder: (Heh)

Voice

[personal profile] wilder 2013-09-05 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, that would be pretty cool wouldn't it?

Hm, can't blame you. Anyway, most of that stuff's metaphors. He's not actually in love with the sun.
vimdicare: (pic#6239991)

[personal profile] vimdicare 2013-09-05 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
[Erika hears his, uh, interesting recital and comes forward.]

That's from Romeo and Juliet. You really can't understand it...? Hm you ever been in love? That's a very basic play...
blossomgale: ([in-game] curious cat)

[personal profile] blossomgale 2013-09-05 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
[ As Sophie leaves one of the training rooms, she overhears her father reciting some of the lines. Wow, a lot of what Asbel's reading just flies over her head! Yeah, what is he reading? ]

...Asbel, who's in love with the sun?
scentofpink: (considering cravings)

[voice]

[personal profile] scentofpink 2013-09-05 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
Play, huh? Too bad my sister isn't here, she'd be all over that.
therealrisette: (Awww you're so adorable!)

[Voice]

[personal profile] therealrisette 2013-09-05 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
[Uh-oh, someone said "theater", "talent" and "play" in the same breath... this is almost like saying an ancient ghost's name three times to summon it. Or, in this case, summoning a very perky and familiar girl. ... With her even more familiar voice, even.]

You're putting on a play?

[Yep, she sure sounds excited!]
scentofpink: (musing on mists)

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[personal profile] scentofpink 2013-09-05 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
She's done it all. Theatre's one of her big passions. She keeps inviting me to her plays, too. Sometimes she even drags me into acting with her, though I don't do it that often.
therealrisette: (Who's there?)

[Voice] I have been waiting so long for this to happen, you have no idea... xD

[personal profile] therealrisette 2013-09-05 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
... You did?

[She sounds confused now.]

I don't really remember. But I'd love to help! ... Maybe we could even find something less depressing?

[This world is sad enough without putting on a sad play.]
onhold: (wistful ▶ hmmm)

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[personal profile] onhold 2013-09-05 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
( Karina had decided that it was time to check out what this whole 'network' thing, and it was just her luck that this was one on of the first broadcasts that she'd come across. )

What's this about a talent competition?
wilder: (hey that's great)

Voice

[personal profile] wilder 2013-09-05 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's a boring answer for what you'd do with invisibility! [It really really should be]

Noooo. He's saying that there's been no girl more beautiful than the one he loves since the world began!

vimdicare: (pic#6247196)

[personal profile] vimdicare 2013-09-05 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
[She can't help giggling into her hand.]

Well... it's a beginner play. Most people learn it. I read it in basic English first because the language was a little hard for me. But passages of it come up in English literature so often I started to recognise it. It's not my native language, you see.

[Erika sits down beside him and points to the passage.]

This is showing Romeo's refusal to consider anyone other than Juliet. She's so beautiful to him that even the sun can't compare to her 'brightness'. Most of his rambling is about how perfect Juliet is to him.
wilder: (ROSE POWER)

Voice

[personal profile] wilder 2013-09-05 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Well yeah. [WHY DID YOU ASK THIS. He'll keep it tame...for now] I mean think of all the places you could go that you normally can't, dude!

[And he just gives a sigh] Wow. You really don't know how romancing works, do you?
onhold: (flick ▶ showing off)

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[personal profile] onhold 2013-09-06 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
So if I'm interested in participating I should get in touch with him?
onhold: (glance ▶ looking over at you)

voice;

[personal profile] onhold 2013-09-08 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
I'm considering it. Does that make you my competition?

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